Looking out my broken window,
I saw people together,
While I walk alone,
With only my own as family.
I walk a lonely road,
one that is full of darkness,
with the whispering trees,
far on the other side,
mocking me.
My reflection on the shallow water,
A sad face of sorrow and grieving,
Couldn’t find my way,
In the sea of loneliness,
Drifting me afar,
Carrying me away,
From the moonlight shadow.
I pray everyday,
That someone will find me,
Pulling me away from this lonesome dwelling,
I hope heaven will be my destination,
But if I’m hellbound,
Whatever lets go down.
i think this is a great poem it comes from the heart of lonelyness...and honesty!
Very, very touching Alex.... I actually feel your pain. Always, Linda
VERY VERY nice. I like it so much it inspired a poem I've written.
Very moving poem, Alex, as is all your work. Straight from the heart. I liked the twist at the end, it added to the poignancy. Don't be too down hearted, though, I'm sure your sincerity will find its match.
amazing poem alex i can also relate to this poem because when i was younger i was very lonly i had not one friend and i sat alone to eat my lunch and i was watching all the other kids in my gread have fun and play games with eatch other and i wanted to feel loved like that.
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
Alex your poem touched my lonely soul......awake to reach out to you..... So bid goodbye to lonesomeness will you?