asma bahrainwala

Rookie - 0 Points (22/03/1985)

Loneliness - Poem by asma bahrainwala

I am afflicted by
Loneliness.
It creates a void
Bottomless.

How can I overcome this
Hollowness?
How can I fill this
Emptiness?

It makes my life
Meaningless.
It plunges me into
Worthlessness.

How can I defeat this
Purposelessness?
How can I embrace this
Loneliness?


Comments about Loneliness by asma bahrainwala

  • (10/8/2006 2:11:00 PM)

    haha asma ur really good
    well i must say honestly this ones better than mine
    but... i took like 5 mins to write mine lol j/.k
    really good i like it better than mine
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  • (9/19/2006 10:43:00 PM)

    u made me drown in loneliness, asma.i am breathless now (Report)Reply

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  • (9/19/2006 12:54:00 AM)

    Asma, i love your style, even if i don't read the poet name, i know its you by the way its structured.

    even the style lends a certain personality to this poem, loneliness is the worst thing a person can go through, like Tracey said, get a frined, or hum hai na PH wale :)

    Preets
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  • Brian Dorn (9/15/2006 1:41:00 PM)

    Asma, a purposeful write that many can relate to... making it all seem less lonely. Well done! !
    Brian
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  • (9/15/2006 12:35:00 PM)

    get a friend they can help U threw your loneliness...... (Report)Reply

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Poem Submitted: Friday, September 15, 2006

Poem Edited: Wednesday, September 15, 2010


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