Longing... Poem by Rebecca Navarre

Longing...

Rating: 4.8

I saw your face, in a strangers
today. And for a moment I felt the
sun's warmth and ray's. And my
heart flooded with all I longed to say.
But, then the clouds passed and took
you away. And I was left standing in
a daze. Watching the autumn leaves
dance and play.

Longing...
Saturday, September 16, 2023
Topic(s) of this poem: autumn,clouds,dance,grief,leaves,loss,love,standing
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Rose Marie Juan-austin 25 September 2023

A very touching poem so tenderly and lovingly expressed. Each and every line stirs the heart.

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Sandra Feldman 26 September 2023

Amazingly vivid and sad. Goes right thru the heart. Excellently written and felt poetry, isj ust that way.

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Anjandev Roy 26 September 2023

This is a brilliant piece....thanks for sharing....

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LeeAnn Azzopardi 26 September 2023

Thank you for sharing this thoughtful poem. It touched my heart Bravo! ! ! !

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Sylvia Frances Chan 26 September 2023

Your photograph is beautiful, your words are most beautiful, your inner heart shines utmost Beauty. TOP Marks my dear Becca, your friend Sylvia

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Rose Marie Juan-austin 25 September 2023

So poignant yet heartwarming. Loved the superb imagery of this write.

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