I'm going to look back upon
Where love was pure to me
As love to me is getting underrated
People think that love is their enemy
Because how love would make a heart
Weep and break into pieces like glass
But it still alive and active so I embrace it
Hated or loved I tried to look back on love
Where it was pure from within one's self
I look back where I had my first crush and kiss
I nearly blackout by the sudden emotions in me
I didn't know what to say, to do but to glare at my
Crush eyes as we walk home holding hands
Love is describe by many poets and writers
But never before that have I ever seen it thrown
Away like trash but if I can go back where love was
Pure I would maintain that feeling and never manipulated
This feeling to my sinister sins or pleasure needs
So I look back to the past to fix and relive memories
And never repeat the nightmares in my dark side of
My life so never playback about bad times in your life
And just think, dream or just...Look Back.
I love this poem because its different, looking for good.i like that you put thoughts into your poetry. Stacey x
an amazingly great write...im not very much fond of love poems but i liked different way of your poem writing....10/10
Absolutely excellent! I really love this poem a lot. <3 Good Job -Tyease
compact composition. emitting intense love....fine...........10+
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
Look back at where you have started.....and you can mould your love from there.Marvellous piece Wright.