Lost in Love's Chant
I still can't call to mind our first meeting
But as we saw each other more frequently
You spoke to me in the inaudible language of your eyes
And was bewitched by the clear glow on your face
Like magnet to a piece of metal, I was drawn to you.
When you whispered love's veiled message
With haunting echoes faintly singing
I found nothing to match your melodic musing
And felt my desires taking a headlong ride
With my heart opening to the seamless web of dreams
Never had I known love's balmy touch before.
As your words fell on me like ambrosia from heaven,
Sweet and fragrant sensations danced within my brain
A pleasant ache tickled me from inside
And I exploded with an inexpressible yearning!
You spoke to me in the inaudible language of your eyes And was bewitched by the clear glow on your face Like magnet to a piece of metal, I was drawn to you. SIMPLY BEAUTIFUL THE WHOLE TRUTH FIST SIGHT 'TIS SILENTLY MISS
The meeting is valuable as this has given us the greater opportunity to feel each other. A piece of metal attracts magnet and this is love that has attracted attention. Beauty of mind is very well felt. Nice poem is well written...10+
(- ) for you, for your entire life to be seated on the best aromatic bud of roses before the rising sun before setting down of brightest moon and I will be lost there where your chanting voice gripes me inseparably for the entire life//
Well terrific way of understanding love. A lovely lyrics with profound love is exhibited in the exhibition of marvellous words. Top notch poems like this show you really deserves to in top 500 poets list. I adore your muse! ๐๐๐๐
Well terrific way of understanding love. A lovely lyrics with profound love is exhibited in the exhibition of marvellous words. Top notch poems like this show you really deserves to in top 500 poets list. I adore your muse! ๐๐๐๐
Such a tremendous verse, Valsa. As I read the first stanza I think this many not be the first love, but it is the deepest, the most profound, most lasting love. Can it endure beyond mere mortality? Great poem, Valsa.
A beautiful poem on love. A love that sprouts in all romantic youths. A love that is kindled at first sight and kept in heart and nurtured by frequent meeting. A typical romance portrayed in natural sequence right from the first meeting to the moment his sweet voice falls in the ears. Marvellous....10
Like a piece of metal to a magnet I was drawn to you - the picture demonstrates that well, of whoever it may be! This is a beautiful poem with an apt title. The lines are well understood by those who have ever been 'in love'. A poem that evokes heavenly feelings of love, I liked it very much. Gets a 10 from me.
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
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