poet Valsa George

Valsa George

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Love Sparks

As our eyes met, sparks of love emitted
Emotions swelled, passions surged
Like a well full to the brim
A tear drop glistened in your eyes

Cutting across the borders,
It slithered down your creamy cheek

As a freshly formed globule of dew,
Cracking into zillion rays of light,
It created a zillion wavelets of joy
And my mind danced in timeless rhythm!

Topic(s) of this poem: eyes, love, tears

Poem Submitted: Sunday, September 20, 2020

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  • Geeta Radhakrishna MenonGeeta Radhakrishna Menon (9/25/2020 1:12:00 AM)

    It created a zillion wavelets of joy
    And my mind danced in timeless rhythm!

    Wonderful love poem so beautifully penned. Loved it dear Valsa....5 Stars

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  • Kumarmani MahakulKumarmani Mahakul (9/22/2020 6:00:00 PM)

    How does love spark is well illustrated in this poem by you. It begins from eyes. It may be cited...As our eyes met, sparks of love emitted / Emotions swelled, passions surged
    Like a well full to the brim / A tear drop glistened in your eyes. Beautifully put. Graphic attached. Full to full...five stars.

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  • Mahtab BangaleeMahtab Bangalee (9/22/2020 6:48:00 AM)

    when come
    eyes to eyes
    hands to hands
    smiles to smiles
    breaths to breaths
    so near, so near......

    then neither she
    nor me
    no duality there is

    love
    lives
    as ONE
    in silent peace

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  • Rose Marie Juan-austinRose Marie Juan-austin (9/21/2020 8:50:00 PM)

    A very lovely poem full of passion
    and deep emotions.
    It depicts a strong affection between two
    people and who care deeply for each other.
    Beautifully crafted with
    compelling imagery.
    Five Stars! ! !

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  • Anjandev Roy (9/21/2020 5:50:00 AM)

    ...........danced in timeless rhythm............wonderful......thank u....anjandev roy.

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  • Varsha MVarsha M (9/21/2020 1:20:00 AM)

    Ma'am this is splendid. A drop in eye turning to zillion wavelets yet to be born quenching every emotions I lived to see it materialize under the sun that gives light. Touched the heart.

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  • Rajnish MangaRajnish Manga (9/21/2020 1:11:00 AM)

    Dazzling images of love expressed through emotional vibes.
    This small poem enchants with its irresistible spell. Thanks.

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  • Bernard F. AsuncionBernard F. Asuncion (9/21/2020 12:20:00 AM)

    A well penned poem.
    Truly lovely and pretty....5 stars +++

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  • Khairul AhsanKhairul Ahsan (9/21/2020 12:18:00 AM)

    What a beautiful description of a moment when pairs of eyes emitted sparks of love through a teardrop that 'created a zillion wavelets of joy'!
    The graphic is beautiful too!
    'And my mind danced in timeless rhythm! ' - Oh yes, it must be so!
    The poem gets full marks from me,5/5!

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  • Kostas LagosKostas Lagos (9/21/2020 12:15:00 AM)

    Well composed poem Valsa!

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  • Robert Murray SmithRobert Murray Smith (9/21/2020 12:04:00 AM)

    A truly romantic write.

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