Love And Tears Poem by Beach Girl

Or a sign of new growth here now! Look up again, unfurrow your brow! Grab love, give it, tis everywhere in the vines, in your hair! Lovely poem you wrote!

Love and tears at last brings happiness- nice

A lovely picture you drew with the jasmine vines where the traces of both joy and fear was there, enjoyed.

Memories of love and tears brought on by intoxication of the flowers love fragrance...powerful poem bringing on loneliness as I feel it...regards

the opposites dealt with in a lovely verse poetic charming and great read liked

The flower remembers The Love and Joys - happy ending and nothing fears

Heavy with fragrance As sweet as your heart I stood in the garden Till day did depart...... lost love and tears. human mind, human heart, its desires, its sense of loss, its craving for love. all these came in your poem. thank you very much. it was a pleasure to read your poem thank you. tony

words used are soft but are of heavy meaning.alternate rhyme scheme is nicely used.nicely written madam.

Watching daylight disappear while standing in the garden, seeing the flowers hiding their faces from the twilight, their scent now gone like love being lost. Nature's sign of loss and tears! Beautiful imagery and rhythm, soulful feelings hiding beneath the imagery, a really great poem! Thank you for sharing it. RoseAnn

beautifully written lines. I like it very much.