Love Doth As I Know -1 Poem by Asif Baloch

Love Doth As I Know -1

Rating: 5.0


Love doth as I know
Is yearning for all life long?
Waiting to be hold, hug or kiss
Lying on the flames of denial
Woke but still in dreams
Wounds with no blood left to shed
Joyness thou long since dead
Smiles without liveliness
Laugh filled loneliness
Neither living nor dying
Trembling soul grieving heart
Listens to whispering wisps

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Sarwar Chowdhury 28 October 2008

Beautifully in short captured a lot.... Love has its outer and inner meaning. Shakespere in his poem 'Love' made a mocking voice towards love. ya sure 10+++++++

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Sarah Abdullah 28 October 2008

Simply Beautiful Loved how Meanings flow easly into a readers mind Well done

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Seema Aarella 28 October 2008

encased tender buds, waiting within the green cover...in the cold arms of freezing winter....waiting to be kissed and opened by the warm hands of colourful spring.... hoping that dead love be revived soon by the touch of caring hands, by the glance of lovable eyes, by the words of passionate heart....

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Anjali Sinha 24 November 2008

wow! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! love crescending towards whispering wisps---lovely-- another masterpiece from asif A+ and 10+ regards anju

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Kesav Easwaran 01 November 2008

a good write on love feelings...thanks, Aijaz 10

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Sandra Fowler 29 October 2008

A very emotional poem that fades away in whispers. Very effective. Ten from me. As always, Sandra

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Sarvesh Kulkarni 29 October 2008

A very passionate and intense poem. Loved the way you expressed feelings. Thank you very much.

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Sathyanarayana M V S 29 October 2008

this is really good. I could see some traces of feelings I expressed in 'die another death' and 'gullotine'. Love poems are always beautiful.........10

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