Love In The Rains Poem by Akhtar Jawad

Love In The Rains

Rating: 5.0


Rains, rains, the exciting rains,
Flowers in the arms of washed greenery,
I have no worry of the stains,
Who hasn't gone crazy in such a scenery?
Clouds are drunk, showers of wine,
A Cupid I see at a brewery,
A moon is sleeping in her bed room,
The sun has forgotten his chivalry,
The moon is hidden beneath silky shawls,
Stars are there as diamond jewelry,
It's a naughty drop of rain that crawls,
Touches and snatches her from a fairy,
She awakes, she is a doll made of clay,
Comes to me with her all hot treasury,
She is a bottle of wine, drink and play,
My woman with me, no need of brewery.
Soothing is the mud, the washing rains,
Clay in love of clay, no worry of stains.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Dr Dillip K Swain 26 July 2020

A magnificent poem sir! My favorite lines: A Cupid I see at a brewery/A moon is sleeping in her bed room/The sun has forgotten his chivalry/The moon is hidden beneath silky shawls/Stars are there as diamond jewelry. Beautifully composed......10/10

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Yoonoos Peerbocus 24 July 2020

clay in love with clay /drunk /play in rain- multiple symbolism is admixed appears jumbling but poetically underpinned with a message, , fine

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Mahtab Bangalee 24 July 2020

Beautiful loving poem on the rain; Rain the sweeper the stain of inside lovelorn heart Rain the pain killer from the loneliness mirth Rain the romantic carrier If lover and beloved enjoy it together

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Aarzoo Mehek 24 July 2020

Awesome narrative thought. I can feel the rain sitting at my drawing rooms through your words. Beautifully written poem let me enjoy it with a cup of tea.10++ for making my day beautiful. And it's raining here too. 🙂

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