Love Nest Poem by Jim Yerman

Love Nest

Rating: 4.7

I recently ran across a list Deborah and I created long ago
It contained the dreams for our perfect house...our ideal bungalow.

We called it our North Carolina Love Nest and it was to be our creed
For we thought, on this paper, we listed everything we'd need.

Everything to keep us contented, our personal honeycomb
Everything our minds could think make a happy home.

We were young and innocent back then...and our dreams...unlimited and grand
But despite our best didn't go the way we planned.

You see we never built our dream house...but I still consider myself blessed
Because we realized...if we have doesn't matter where we nest.

Friday, October 7, 2016
Topic(s) of this poem: happiness,love
Mizzy ........ 09 October 2016

A delightful read Jim......heartwarming love tale, ......Congrats! !

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Kim Barney 09 October 2016

With love, it doesn't matter where we are. Our family is more important than the house we live in. Beautiful poem, and congrats on having it selected as poem of the day!

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Ratnakar Mandlik 09 October 2016

If we have doesn't matter where we live Great inference drawn. A superb love nest. Heartiest Congrats on the POD.

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Anil Kumar Panda 09 October 2016

Yeah, if love is there in heart no home is required. Very nice. liked it. Congrats for the poem of the day.

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Jayatissa K. Liyanage 09 October 2016

if we have doesn't matter where we nest..... what a profound meaning it has! A universally valid theme, wonderfully crafted poem, and utterly simple diction elevating Jim to a well deserved zenith. Congrats for being PoD.

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M. Asim Nehal 20 June 2023

Excellent poem, great rhyming and perfect flow.

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Bri Edwards 31 October 2022

Oh! P of the D...years ago I see upon a closer look. I suspect you are no longer with PH as you have not responded to a few messages I've left over two years. ; (

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Bri Edwards 31 October 2022

(oops) preference here at home, in SC, either. No biography? bri ;) I like the 2-line stanzas, the story, and the fine rhyming. ;) p.s. I didn't know this was a P of the D till I read Kim's comment. bri ;)

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Bri Edwards 31 October 2022

I gave 4 stars, but I'd like 'rest', not 'nest' for poem's last word. Ah, well, I don't always get

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Dr Dillip K Swain 30 August 2021

Liked the very phrae 'personal honeycomb' A magnificent poem!

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