Love Nest Poem by Jim Yerman
Love Nest
I recently ran across a list Deborah and I created long ago
It contained the dreams for our perfect house...our ideal bungalow.
We called it our North Carolina Love Nest and it was to be our creed
For we thought, on this paper, we listed everything we'd need.
Everything to keep us contented, our personal honeycomb
Everything our minds could think of...to make a happy home.
We were young and innocent back then...and our dreams...unlimited and grand
But despite our best intentions...life didn't go the way we planned.
You see we never built our dream house...but I still consider myself blessed
Because we realized...if we have love...it doesn't matter where we nest.
With love, it doesn't matter where we are. Our family is more important than the house we live in. Beautiful poem, and congrats on having it selected as poem of the day!
If we have love...it doesn't matter where we live Great inference drawn. A superb love nest. Heartiest Congrats on the POD.
Yeah, if love is there in heart no home is required. Very nice. liked it. Congrats for the poem of the day.
if we have love...it doesn't matter where we nest..... what a profound meaning it has! A universally valid theme, wonderfully crafted poem, and utterly simple diction elevating Jim to a well deserved zenith. Congrats for being PoD.
Oh! P of the D...years ago I see upon a closer look. I suspect you are no longer with PH as you have not responded to a few messages I've left over two years. ; (
(oops) ....my preference here at home, in SC, either. No biography? bri ;) I like the 2-line stanzas, the story, and the fine rhyming. ;) p.s. I didn't know this was a P of the D till I read Kim's comment. bri ;)
I gave 4 stars, but I'd like 'rest', not 'nest' for poem's last word. Ah, well, I don't always get
Liked the very phrae 'personal honeycomb' A magnificent poem!
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
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9/26/2023 3:25:28 PM # 1.0.0.1113
A delightful read Jim......heartwarming love tale, ......Congrats! !