Love Of Miles And Miles Poem by Poetheart Morgan

Love Of Miles And Miles

Rating: 5.0


I traced thin lines in a sea map

measuring
the distance between north and south
in coloured stains on a table
I drowned

~the distance~
oh! infamous! falls asleep on me

i am yellow you blue
on this sea chart called
love of miles and miles
S
the geography is on my heart
the stones, the sand, the ocean
all trembling together

~in my tiny heart~

can you hear the sound?
tin tin tin
~tinkling~

with my hands i created a wave

to suck me violently

a new route by reach you
had to

is there where the journey depart~
so sorry - was a revolted sea-

i sank there

and all that was rested on me
sank also

i become a woman in blue again
taking all to the deep

my love, my breast, my last breath....
and one tiny heart
to the bottom

POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
Sorry if a made any mistake! ! ! ! English is my passion and my doom at same time. Like a lover! ! !
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Anil Kumar Panda 12 December 2013

beautifully done poetess.like every lines of it.

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Laurie X3 14 December 2013

What a vision created here! I shall watch for the storm you stirred with your hand.

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Guy Dimitri Jagodinski 17 December 2013

I agree even though I speak English. And yes like a lover.

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Musfiq Us Shaleheen 17 December 2013

really a eager of emotion flows through... geography in your heart.. breathtaking.. i hear the tin tin sound... Musfiq

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Sekharan Pookkat 18 December 2013

distance feels in kilometers, oceans and seas make barricades mountains and valleys block your journey only in earth but in mind the same second.

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Susan Lacovara 22 March 2014

Your poem is exquisite in it's well communicated flair for taking us along the waves your soul surfed....beautiful! ! ! ! PEACE

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Poetheart Morgan 25 December 2013

Thanks so much Suman, for you too. You are so gentle, OH!

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Suman Kumar Das 25 December 2013

A commendable piece of ink! ..............................so beautifully penned.................loved it. Dear Poetess! Wishing you and your loved ones a happy Christmas!

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Ramesh Rai 24 December 2013

Enchanting write. Lovely colored with blue ink blooms under twilight of moon sparkling through stars and reaches every loving guy. lovely piece. wooooooooooow.100 out of 10

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Stan Petrovich 24 December 2013

Colored lines on cartographic ocean charts; They keep us apart; I dare rip up the maps Calling it a mishap Or some such breach of truth: This is a wonderful poem, forsooth!

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