Heart bespoken hour.
My love a flower.
Entwined passioned love.
Fluttering like a dove.
Heartbeats skip time.
Our love, heavens rhyme.
Golden crested sunrise.
Stare into my eye's.
Endless our love's pace.
Shrouded by Lilly lace.
5/2/09 POEWHIT
JESUS SAVES
no pyrotechniques perfect use of simile yoy are great metaphorical poet
Shrouded by Lilly lace. ....................................... It's very nice... 10... Tsira
‘Shrouded by Lilly lace’ Exuberance emotion! Enjoyed to it's true core. Ten+ Ms. Nivedita Thanks for comments Cordially invite to read and comment on Enigmatic Navel Lie Sly or other poems. niv
This is a beautiful love poem............ i love the metaphor ' My love is a flower'
very clever to use the 'My love a flower' and relate it to the lilly in the end...
Endless our love's pace., , , very true The journey of love is never ending It is never alone for My love is a flower. Entwined with passioned love. Wonderful dignified expression Of true love which is ever eternal!
Endless our love's pace. Shrouded by Lilly lace. very very nice....great similitude and imaginings cheers
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
lovely write Joe...simply flows....Fi 10 +++