Love Poem Poem by Brian Mayo

Love Poem

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A little poem to tuck you in
The gal with whom I've never been
Our love merely professed online
The perfect way to keep what's mine
I'll use the money that I've saved
To have my driveway freshly paved
Sleep well, my dear, I'll dream of you
And hope you're dreaming of me, too.

Monday, February 29, 2016
Topic(s) of this poem: love,money,relationships
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
M Asim Nehal 03 March 2016

Online romancing is something very fishy, no doubt it will ignite the love-fire in you but it will miss the human touch, occasional brushes and I agree with Pamela, safe and cheap....with no demands and commands. Nice poem Brian.

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Souren Mondal 02 March 2016

Is Skype involved in the whole thing Brian? ? ;)

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Pamela Sinicrope 29 February 2016

I like your new love poem.... Safe and cheap. Get that driveway paved. You're too funny! I think the length of this poem is just perfect and I like the touch of humor and affection that is expressed in it. Yes...I hope she wasn't really a 46 yo man in Poughkeepsie! :)

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Kelly Kurt 29 February 2016

There's a chance that the girl met only online is really a 46 year old man in Poughkeepsie.: -)

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Brian Mayo 02 March 2016

Nope. You're wrong. It was Muncie, Indiana. lol

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