Lovely butterflies
Swim into the humid air
Like petals flying.
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Hi Rose Marie, Beautiful little poem. An ode to The Creator, who gave us vision and aesthetic sense to enjoy beauty.
A lovely, heart-felt write Rose Marie. Short and it glides and lingers forever, like a good poem should. You always see the good things in life and I salute you. Thank you for writing and sharing this Rose Marie.10++ and added to my treasure chest. Thank you.
Muse of the Butterflies in the air! ! 🦋🦋🦋🎶 Thanks for sharing this poem with us.
A rare observation so true, yes they hardly fly, they seem to swim in air, and yes, it looks as if petals are flying. A great Haiku.
Oh dear; how amazing and bland this unique imagery? even the poet here can understand the virtue of butterfly...get a full mark without doubt....excellent masterpiece of work
A lovely poem! I sincerely appreciate the fabulous use of simile! To MyPoemList
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
An amazing haiku, dear ate Rose. I love it...10+++