Loves Ocean

Rating: 5.0
So the waves move.
We all find our groove.
Some with the silver spoon.
Looking wayward at noon.
Crying baby all in tears.
No milk from MOMS fears.
Love rides the tides of life.
Full of turmoil and wicked strife.
Drunk bar stool tells its story.
Empty words of its glory.
Cry onward plastic fallen.
Calls of the empty stalls.
Wednesday, December 6, 2006
Patti Masterman 10 September 2009
Shows an interesting and versatile style.
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Sarwar Chowdhury 31 August 2009
Awesome indeed! waves of love ocean submerge us always! 10+
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Louis Rams 04 November 2008
deep thoughts in your words this is one i have'nt heard great! p.s. and thank you for reading my poem
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Sherif Monem 04 October 2008
Beautiful poem, very fluid and nice Ryhme.
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Rishi Menon 23 September 2008
i really like this poem. its very well written. someday i hope to write like this.
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rohit sapra 23 September 2008
I really like the pattern in which you have written this poem. Goes to show the depth the author has as every word signifies uniqueness.
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Whitney Nicole Albright* 23 September 2008
Thanks for my reader comment. This is an awesome poem.
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Blue Eyes 20 September 2008
love is really like waves that take us without giving us choice to fight back but little.
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Ravi Chandran 06 September 2008
Drunk bar stool tells its story. Empty words of its glory And i got so much worry.......'cause the world denies me fury Nice...........I'm so much impressed
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