Bri Edwards

Gold Star - 61,912 Points (some time ago / Earth, i believe)

Luck For Me.... [inspired By Loke Kok Yee; Short; Luck; Food] - Poem by Bri Edwards

more luck some of us could use right now.
for instance i'd like to find (in backyard) a cow...
which i could then milk each morningtide.....
to have milk for cereal with o.j. on the side!

but then i'd need more luck to grow a tree,
so i'd always have fresh oranges for 'free' ….
in order to squeeze for their sweet juice.
AND for x-mas luck i could find.....a fat goose! !

Topic(s) of this poem: luck


Poet's Notes about The Poem

my PH friend, Loke Kok Yee, suggested luck can come in handy. this poem is part of my response to his message. thanks, bro. :) bri

Comments about Luck For Me.... [inspired By Loke Kok Yee; Short; Luck; Food] by Bri Edwards

  • (11/13/2015 4:22:00 AM)


    Where do you get your inspiration from, Bri? The fridge?
    Another witty write, of course on one of your favourite subjects.
    If you hadn't have been a postal worker I'm sure you'd have made a fist of farming. Ha ha.
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  • Lyn Paul (11/11/2015 9:40:00 PM)


    May luck be with us all. Positivity brings luck!
    Lovely to see a pic of your beautiful wife and thanks for keeping us up to date Bri with comps,
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  • (11/10/2015 2:12:00 AM)


    By luck I do not mean milk or a cow
    luck is when things happen your way somehow
    and if you decide to grow a tree
    a banana tree will grow easier you see
    X'mas is still far far away
    get some chips or you'll starve today
    thanks Bri-10++
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  • Billy Loving (11/9/2015 12:52:00 PM)


    nicely done - I enjoyed this poem (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Monday, November 9, 2015



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