Sweet words shower heavenly happiness
Bitter words can only fill our heart, sadness
If Great words inspire you towards boldness
Ungrateful words merely spread soul's sickness
Oh! My Spirit, why have you made me helpless?
Don't you repent once watching me speechless?
Have I ever wished your gifts limitless?
Never! I only longed for endless heartfelt words.
If hi, sorry, thanks can make one smile
Do you prefer hiding me from your profile?
Stop not harvesting the garden of life fertile
Always stay with me by your encouraging words!
I have written a poem in response to your poem 'MAGICAL WORDS' Rekha. It is quite long so I will only briefly quote from it below We 'create our world realities, we bless with smiles, radiant with shimmering, life goodwill or we curse; with anger, greed, pride, selfishness, thoughtlessness; choose words to nurture to bless or embrace silences' As you bless us with your words Rekha, so I will receive your words, and respond with blessings of appreciation. Your friend Terence.
I like the way you poems have that cascading effect. They end well and this piece expresses much wisdom for a lesson for all to think about.
Its like a nicely wrapped present filled with your heartfelt words. Wonderfull poetic style. Spreading words of wisdom makes one think about life from different angles, its a poet´s mission.
The life, the world speed around words, magical words. You pointed the importance of words to our life that gives us happiness or sadness, boldness or sickness..Cristina Teodor
A nice creation. An insightful depiction of the magical power of words nicely embellished in poetic rhyme and rhythm. Focussed and factual. Thanks for sharing Rekha and do remain enriched.
What a wonderful poem, not only nicely written but greatest teaching, very true, such simple words like hi, sorry, thanks can do the math and open the magic curtain of most beautiful sight: sweet Smile! Thank you, you made my day!
I like this poem it has the same meaning and intent as my poem. I think the title is With Hope.
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
grt rhyming set....... grt poem....... grt theme - evry working mom's despair