Monk And Mother Poem by Rekha Mandagere

Monk And Mother

Rating: 4.3


One who devoids himself from worldly life
Always engaged in the pursuit of noble divine
By changing the curtain of reality to the heaven
Eager to wash away all the memories of grief
Makes you smile by taking you away for a brief
Goes away as a speedy flash unattached, is a Monk

The one who makes the weeping child smile
By supporting its balanced growth when it is fragile
Initiates the child to live with the spirits of Divine
But always binds the child with both- earth and heaven
Smiles with the child, cries with the child and always dearer
Closer, Trust-worthy, ever devoted to stand as a shade attached is Mother!

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Jenny Gordon 19 February 2011

Fascinating comparison of the office of monks and mothers....only problem is, the monk is doomed to perish, ...the mother is not necessarily.....I am unfamiliar with the religion myself, so cannot argue the verity of this, but as you've depicted it, the two do seem very similar. On the other hand, the natural/earthly mother does not connect the child with God, but she may instruct the child in His Ways from his Word.

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Narayanan Ramakrishnan 21 February 2011

Philosophical comparison indeed. While both beging with alphabet M, monk, especaially modern cannot be taken at face value. While the other M will remain the same, her attachment, sincerity and her plaibility to her offspring, yesterday, today, and tomarrow.

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Pranab K Chakraborty 22 February 2011

Intelligently distinguished two singularity. Its the professional work for a lawyer but as a poet we expect more from a writing as a poem. Thank you. Regards, pranab

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Sally Plumb Plumb 22 February 2011

A beautiful couple.

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Jenny Gordon 23 February 2011

Fascinating comparison of the office of monks and mothers....only problem is, the monk is doomed to perish, ...the mother is not necessarily.....I am unfamiliar with the religion myself, so cannot argue the verity of this, but as you've depicted it, the two do seem very similar. In both cases, neither connects the child with God, yet she may instruct the child in His Ways from His Word.

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Matt Mooney 11 June 2011

A poem rich in meaning and warm emotion.10.

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Dave Dafes 19 March 2011

A Philosophical comparison of a mothers love and devotion....I want to say a BIG thank you for blessing us with this beautiful piece...

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Bernard Snyder 03 March 2011

This is another great poem Rekha! It is such a well-spoken piece and it exemplifies the deep love between a mother and child. Well-worded my friend!

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Mohammad Akmal Nazir 28 February 2011

I would like to thank you for writing such a good poem. Your comparison is fantastic. Nobody is like mother. She is the most reverred entity on the earth. She is greater than even Heaven which lies under her feet. Excellent stuff.

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Nimal Dunuhinga 27 February 2011

A great comparison and I would prefer Mother for her unlimited love!

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