Magnetism Poem by PERSIAN NIGHTINGALE

Magnetism

Rating: 5.0


Physically
Similar poles of magnets
Repel each other
Though
Bitter feelings
Attract blight

Opposite poles
Attract then again
But
Pleasant feelings
Attract delight

Flowers are brightly colored
To attract butterflies
Feel good
Feel good
Be flower
Pull happiness
Your fate
You write

(2009/2/27)

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Lynda Robson 27 February 2009

I am attracted to your work like a magnet, another excellent write, 10 Lynda xx

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Aijaz Asif 27 February 2009

jeep the positive thinking to achieve the goal... a very nice and vivid write indeed...thanks for sharing 10 rgds asif

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C.R. Clark 28 February 2009

An excellent write, as usual, Nightingale. Thanks Richard

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M M 02 March 2009

Attraction of opposite poles, 'coincidence of opposites'... A deep thought through simple and effective words, which build a very interesting poem! 10!

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Ammusanthosh 09 February 2021

Magnetism poem

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Magnetism- the unseen attraction that pulls and binds, creating a solidarity of one

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Marvin Brato 10 March 2009

P eople like magnets e xcites attraction or r epel each other s omehow i n all things with life a ttraction prevails n othing really repels for long

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Linda Moore 07 March 2009

I am A Giant Magnet attracting all things Good and Wonderful, I Love it.......10

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The theme and title of Magnetism is well thought out and excellent writing. Karin Anderson

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