Magnificient Face Poem by lily peace lago every by to ph

Magnificient Face

Rating: 5.0


Magnificient face and the timid eyes
curly lips beckoning my heart
and you are the eagle
flying high for me to watch..

You are a mist drifting in me
watching you melting in the first ray
me remember the hottest parts
which is the thunder in me to watch....

Blossomed red rose
and the fragraance jasmine
lotus in vehement bowed away
which remember me to watch ecstasy in you...

In me blooming around inner fragmented heart
reflecting you in the nerves
scattered alive in me walking the ramp
and angle alive killed me none to watch the burried scalp...

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Rm. Shanmugam Chettiar 19 October 2009

a tempting poem.10 marks shan

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Sadiqullah Khan 31 October 2009

Expressive, but who is he?

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Catrina Heart 30 October 2009

wow what a lovely poem shared...............well done! ! !

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Jyoti Saxena 26 October 2009

you are a mist drifting in me; lotus in vehement bowed away-vow wonderful imagery - harmonious blending of mystcism and passionate love-yr poem has etherical touch-full 10

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Ramesh T A 25 October 2009

Beautiful poetic expression invoking haunting sensation quite rich in imagery makes this poem a quality piece!

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 23 October 2009

Magnificient face and the timid eyes curly lips beckoning my heart and you are the eagle flying high for me to watch.....good temptation and well one can fall for desire...lovely poem with intense love....10 read mine... as friend.... anywhere.. butterflied around...miss i miss you

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