Fragrance,
Flowers he likes.
Powerful they are, make sense,
Amazing artwork,
Meaningful.
Their beauties are wow! Hot, cool.
As
Knows he-
Deffodil - chivalry
Daisy - innocence
Cosmos - peaceful
Crocus - foresight
Delphinium - boldness
Magnolia – dignity
Orchid – delicate beauty.
So on....
Other day
The Magnolia captured his sight
Amazed him, have been tight,
On the way,
Outside the garden, away.
Oh! great! beautiful! Looks niminy-piminy!
He instantly become a ninny.
Gone to near
With cheer!
The flower said,
‘Hey handsome plucky 'sweeto'
Am yours, pluck me’.
Amazed he little more degree.
Hesitate.
Life mate!
Looking around
Blue eyes adoring.
Answered he-
'Really love me? '
Replied-
‘Humm really, love you love,
No bluff, no bluff.
Smell me
All my love for thee,
Oh! come on sweet!
Time passes quick.'
Smiled he,
Thought-
Love got!
It's true, no lie.
How say- no!
Seems introvert so,
Yet reply-
'Love you too I'
Observed A to Z
No sad.
Oh! yea yea!
Dignified Magnolia!
Excellent gesture
He into rapture!
Love confluenced.
Life influenced!
With much zeal they talked
Things open, nothing locked.
When decided to pluck
A painful sigh! Face black!
No aid!
Magnolia said-
'Wait wait hey!
No no, do not nigh,
Do not pluck,
Do not love thy! '
He stuck!
Dubious!
'Out for a duck'!
Asked-
'Why? what happened? '
Replied-
'Don't know, this is the end.'
Magnolia looked at him,
Light of love become dim.
He could not get the language of sight,
He could not take forcibly love's right!
Told he -
'Magnolia! Is it your dignified witticism! '
Silence bloom, fall down ryhm and rhythm!
Take a deep breath he turned,
Seven step, heart burned!
In thought
Something caught-
'Butterfly no need!
Wrong indeed!
Lovely love's fact
At last intersect! '
At that time sounds Magnolia-
'Hey come on my love! yea yea!
Was kidding just
You the dear
Come near
Pluck me pluck me pluck me fast! '
Silence elates
Wounded Love elates
He elates
Magnolia elates
Wave upon wave elating timeless!
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'Pluck me pluck me pluck me fast! ' an interesting poem, beautiful 10
good romantic narration...your imgination is fragrance rich...10
RICH FRAGRANT WORDS...EMBODIED IN LOVE... NICE EXPERIMENTAL STYLE OF WRITING...
i love it i can really smell the fragrant of those flowers you wrote i give it a 10++++++++++++
Magnolia looked at him, Light of love become dim. He could not get the language of sight, He could not take forcibly love's right! yes that how real love develops and mushroom... i was fascinated at the use of words... beautiful theme....10 read mien love at first sight....mary to marry
Wave upon wave elating timeless.. ..a timeless poem with magnolia aroma..a beauty of flower unrestrained..thanks for sharing, Sarwar. Yelena M.
Stupendous. Fabulous. Phenomenal. terrific. astounding. stunning. matchless.
yet again, another 10. i love this one, it can be precieeved various ways, but no matter how its taken, its still a very beautiful piece. you are truely amazing my friend! ! !
Magnolia's one of my favorte and of course the Banyan..please read my Under THE bANYAN tREE...
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
I love this poem. It almost seems like you can smell the flowers and see them and feel them. very good. also I love how you put yourself in there without useing 'I' very good idea.