sometimes i laugh
at the man in the mirror,
the miles written in lines
carved in the stone of experience.
save the world?
hard to do when
you spend all your time
picking yourself up!
years working with my hands,
my back bent and determined.
now i walk with the pain,
well deserved and well earned.
passionate to madness,
been there and back.
now i'm happy with stillness,
when i can steal a moment.
a lover, a fool, a warrior,
a loser... a spiritual walker,
a heretic, a demon...
i paint pictures on dollar store canvases,
with borrowed brushes and dumpster paint.
striving to bring into focus,
the beauty of that which is common!
the mothers, the fathers, the sisters,
the brothers... the 50 hour weeks,
the Saturday night blow...
the simple, and the pride,
of the honest and giving.
the mistakes that make or break a man.
the man in the mirror,
needs no name or title...
remember him for caring,
that will be enough!
Really like this, a fantastic poem, I think you said it all in this one. Fantastic.
The man in the mirror may look like me, but he is not me and disobeys me, because when I raise my right hand, he puts up his left... Just for fun..Eric..Your poem is quite interesting and talks about the hardship of people! ! !
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
This is one awesome poem, very well written.