ONE god created the world
TWO eyes to read the word
THREE daughters for king Lear
FOUR seasons in a year
FIVE fingers in the hand
SIX musicians made a band
SEVEN days in one week
EIGHT boys played hide and seek
NINE planets around the sun
TEN hundred kilos equal a ton
dedicated to the great poet: (HASMUKH AMATHALAL)
february.2009, by: Omar Ibrahim
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Wow sweet work! a creative piece deep and intelligent imagery you combine numbers and matters nice is your song of numbers keep it up, break away your talent write other poems, your style is so lovely ......... 10
interesting...refreshing very imaginative...creative.. like a nursery song if read with a tone, anybody could love this... 10 lovelots, Maia
Well achieved apart from EIGHT and TEN which I found a little weak!
Really fabulous! ! ! Really inspirational! ! ! You have given me great thoughts about writing a new poem... Thanks a lot for such a masterpiece
Beautiful composition …but this numbering different in my mother Land… by 1 Moon 2 Lunar cycle [new moon and full moon] 3 eyes [2 plus third eye] 4 Vedas and so on… Thanks 10 Ms. Nivedita UK
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
Fine diction! sweet indeed! excellent! 10+