Meeting You Poem by Nosheen Irfan

Meeting You

Rating: 5.0


I'll meet you
in the golden hour
to watch your smile
carry the whole ocean
and the dancing shimmer
of waves happily imprisoned
in your eyes

The hour is long to come
and my soul is weary with loneliness
but when the hour comes
I'll beseech time to pause
its ruthless motion
When the hour comes
I'll make it worth
a thousand sunsets

Meeting You
Thursday, September 5, 2019
Topic(s) of this poem: life,love
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
james watkin 05 September 2019

Lovely. Enjoyed reading.

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Sylvia Frances Chan 05 September 2019

With great anticipation you look forward to the hour of meeting, if your loved one has already arrived, you want the hour to never end, that time extends, very romantic described. I am really impressed by this love poem and I enjoyed it immensely. A 10 full score and countless 10's for this impressive poem....

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Kumarmani Mahakul 05 September 2019

This is really a brilliant poem on love and life having thrilling expression. I love most lines are.....The hour is long to come / and my soul is weary with loneliness / but when the hour comes / I'll beseech time to pause / its ruthless motion / When the hour comes / I'll make it worth / a thousand sunsets Thank you dear madam for sharing this gem.10

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Bill Cantrell 05 September 2019

A lovely poem...beseeching ruthless time just might work with a poem this lovely, very good poetry!

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Rose Marie Juan-austin 12 September 2019

What a wonderful poem. The brilliant Poetess brings to heart the wonders of love that hold us spellbound. Beautifully crafted and well executed write. Onto my Poem List.

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Anil Kumar Panda 12 September 2019

Such a beautiful poem on love. Very delicately crafted that rings inside the heart for a long time. Nice photo too. Thanks for sharing. 'I'll beseech time to pause its ruthless motion When the hour comes I'll make it worth a thousand sunsets'... are lovely lines.10+++++++

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M Asim Nehal 09 September 2019

Outstanding poem, worth reading again and again.

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M Asim Nehal 09 September 2019

So is the love and such are the lovers, they never give up hope despite all odds. A wonderful poem, I quote but when the hour comes I'll beseech time to pause its ruthless motion When the hour comes I'll make it worth a thousand sunsets..........Superb and worth waiting

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Rajnish Manga 05 September 2019

I have thoroughly enjoyed reading this beautiful poem of love and longing. The first line reminds me of a Punjabi poem by Amrita Pritam- Mein tainu pher milaangi (I will meet you yet again) . I am tempted to quote a few lines from her poem: I will meet you yet again / How and where? I know not. Perhaps I will become a / figment of your imagination and maybe, spreading myself / in a mysterious line on your canvas / I will keep gazing at you.

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Nosheen Irfan

Nosheen Irfan

Lahore, Pakistan
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