Megha Poem by Bharati Nayak

Megha

Rating: 5.0


Megha,


Hathaat tumeaasila , au

Tup tap shabda karibarsigala

Dekha, dekha

Eigachha maananku dekha

Jhaunli padithiba patra mananku dekha

Kemiti aanandarebibhorsemane

Kemitishihiri uthuchisemananka tanulata

Apekhya thilaa, apekhya thila

Tumara aagamanaku

Aasha thila, bharasaa bithila

Aaukichhibilambare

Semane huetahajijaithaante

Kharatatire

Podaa aasha nei

Semaanemaatirekabar neithaante



Jee'nrahibare, swapnara patra melibaare

Tume kete jaruri

Tumebujhanaahin

Tebe, jete duraaakashare thilebi

Tume aamara eiilakaa ku

Sabu greesmarebhasiaasuthaa

Au ei dharanikukaanlia patraremandidia.




(This poem in Odia Letters)

ମେଘ!





ମେଘ!


ହଠାତତୁମେ ଆସିଲ, ଆଉ

ଟୁପ-ଟାପଶବ୍ଦକରିବର୍ଷି ଗଲ|

ଦେଖ, ଦେଖ,

ଏଇ ଗଛମାନଙ୍କୁଦେଖ,

ଝାଉଁଳିପଡିଥିବାପତ୍ରମାନଙ୍କୁଦେଖ,

କେମିତିଆନନ୍ଦରେ ବିଭୋର ସେମାନେ

କେମିତି ଶିହିରିଉଠୁଛି ସେମାନଙ୍କତନୁଲତା !

ଅପେକ୍ଷାଥିଲା, ଅପେକ୍ଷାଥିଲା

ତୁମରଆଗମନକୁ|

ଆଶାଥିଲା, ଭରସାବି ଥିଲା

ଆଉ କିଛି ବିଳମ୍ବରେ

ସେମାନେହୁଏତ ହଜି ଯାଇଥାନ୍ତେ

ଖରା ତାତିରେ,

ପୋଡାଆଶାନେଇ

ସେମାନେ ମାଟିରେ କବରନେଇଥାନ୍ତେ

ଜୀଇଂ ରହିବାରେ, ସ୍ୱପ୍ନରପତ୍ରମେଲିବାରେ

ତୁମେକେତେଜରୁରୀ

ତୁମେ ବୁଝ ନାହିଁ .

ତେବେ, ଯେତେଦୂର ଆକାଶରେଥିଲେ ବି

ତୁମେଆମରଏଇ ଇଲାକାକୁ

ସବୁଗ୍ରୀଷ୍ମରେ ଭାସି ଆସୁ ଥାଅ

ଆଉଏଇଧରଣୀକୁ କଅଁଳିଆପତ୍ରରେମଣ୍ଡି ଦିଅ|

Tuesday, October 16, 2018
Topic(s) of this poem: cloud
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
A poem in Odia language
'Megha' means cloud

For some reason words are clubbing together.I just don't know what is the problem.Please bear with this.Hope the problem will be rectified.
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Dr Dillip K Swain 16 October 2018

A beautiful poem dear Bharati Apa... enjoyed reading the vivid description of cloud so immaculately depicted in this wonderful work! I would love to read many such beautiful poems from your pen days ahead!

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Bharati Nayak 16 October 2018

Thank you Dillip for your wonderful comment.I am so grateful.

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Dr Dillip K Swain 20 October 2021

You have beautifully described rain here in this magnificent poem.... well penned! !

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Kumarmani Mahakul 30 June 2020

Jhaunli padithiba patra mananku dekha Kemiti aanandare bibhora semane...these lines reveal the coolness of cloud and its lives giving water. An enchanting expression has been made. Beautiful poem.

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Bri Edwards 19 June 2019

if you hadn't mentioned " clubbing" (" clumping" ?) i'd never have noticed! ! ! ! ! hee-hee bri :)

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Bri Edwards 22 November 2018

i tried as best i could with hammer, saw, and chisel to get the words to break out of their clumps, but to no avail! ! ! bri (:

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Kumarmani Mahakul 19 October 2018

A fantastic expression has been made by you on clouds(megha in oriya language) astutely. Every line is interesting. When rain comes how the trees do feel is touchingly inscribed here. It may be cited... Hathaat tumeaasila Tup tupshabda karibarsigala Dekha, dekha Eigachha maananku dekha Jhaunli padithiba patra mananku dekha Kemiti aanandarebibhorsemane Kemitishihiri uthuchisemananka tanulata A beautiful poem so nicely executed.10

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Bharati Nayak 21 October 2018

My gratitude and immense pleasure to get your valuable reviews on my poems.Thank you so much.

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