We were crossing
On the door way
A screen was hanging
I had not seen you
Nor you me
And we collided
You exclaimed
Oh my God
What a lovely morning! !
Moments of collision
Come to life
Our knowing, not knowing
Matter not
They come
And define our course
Many bring lovely things
Many fill with anguish
The flowers and thorns
Come
Defining our moments
Scattering our path
Life is never straight
It is always a zigzag.
Wrong verses right! Thanks for sharing this poem with us.
People come into our lives and then they go, but the one that will stay with you for a long time, is the one that is felt in the heart. For even if one does not look for love, it will find you. If it is your destiny to meet someone it will always find a way. A true beauty of a poem.
could the beginning have anything to do with meeting an arranged spouse-to-be for the first time? could be! i like this very much, and it is to be in the Section B of September 2016's Showcase for PH poets. thanks. bri ;)
Thank you Bri Edwards for selecting it to your September Showcase.Many people and events we encounter daily.Yes, some collisions make our life beautiful and memorable while some encounters we may like to forget.
What Sayeed said! ! ! ! ! The surprises of life are not guaranteed to be sweet ones but they are often life-changing. I love how you introduce your theme with that collision at the doorway- -perfect image, Bharati A perfect 10 for this meeting between us at the doorway of your poem!
Thank you Dear Susan Williams.You are a valuable asset for this website.Your well judged comments on my poems make my day.
Really a great piece of poem, Didi. It was created from within the core of your soul. That is why, it is so touchy.
Thank you Sayeed.I am missing your comments on many of my new poems.
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
Wow imaginative n sensational! Maybe he meant u were lovely. ;) i can relate to such collisions. Nice to read frm u again. Hope u wil too my latest on Dr.Abdul Kalam.
Thank you for your visit and your nice comment.I love your poems and surely read your new posts