Melting Frost Poem by Rini Shibu
Melting Frost
I cant see but i can feel
The breeze that steal
My heart from me
And i love this i agree
As it slips from my palm
Nothing is left in my arm
I just want to say
As it takes far away
More and more i am lost
And i became a melting frost
I became a melting frost... wonderful contemplation! A beautiful poem Rini.. well penned....10
This is a very good and a very heartfelt poem about melting frost.
Beautiful love poem, well articulated and nicely penned in good rhyme scheme with conviction. A lovely creation. Thanks for sharing Rini.
Rini, enjoyed this sweet poem about love! Continue to melt- - the warmth of love is much nicer than freezing alone! : -)
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
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Philosophical poem, life is slipping like sand from hand and frost, great use of metaphor, Loved it 10/10