Memories Poem by Rini Shibu

A touching poem, Rini. Beautifully worded and reading your words in this poem, I can imagine the scenes. As I read the poem, I feel the intimacy here. A Mother Love is non-payable. Thank you for sharing. A 10++++++++++++

Fantastic meter, real deep emotions! ! ! Great poem!

Love and Life! ! Lots of memories to carry. Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

This is a very beautiful and enjoyable poem to read.

O what a coincidence we both composed on memories once we did on LONELINESS NOW IS A CHALLENGE COMPOSE ONE ON HAPPINESS A FRIEND HAS ASKED WHO CAN BE BETTER THAN YE R SSSSSSS

Hardship in life will never be an obstacle to someone who perseveres. A mother will always give her best for the welfare of her child. A touching and wonderful poem that conveys love and care.

Well written. So nicely penned about the journey of life! Honorable poet proved both her vision and the skill to construct her thoughts. Thanks for sharing.

Hi Rini, A Lovely poem from Rini after a long time. “Tired are her wings As she floats and swings” Keen observation of nature, which is Rini’s strength. Birds are often used as metaphor for memories. Here, Rini tells us a small story of birds and love of a mother to her little ones. The mother has “lots of memories to carry”...The reader feels as if the birds represent the dear memories of the poet..

What a fine poem! Such emotions!

Birds and memories have many things in common which perfectly fit into the description given in the poem. Thanks. The brevity is quite impressive.