Mine Poem by Tareq Jalabi

Mine

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i have a poem
her every line
starts and ends
with words that are divine
her black hair and
her white skin
are more beautiful
than fatal sin
she is as bright
as sunshine
she is great
she is sublime
whenever she goes
into an inn
everybody admires
her sparkling pin
she`s always rising
and has no decline
that is a poem
i can proudly call mine

many people asked me why u used the word pin, well i mean by it the piece of jewelry that has diamonds at its both ends.

Monday, November 24, 2008
Topic(s) of this poem: love and art
COMMENTS OF THE POEM

Blue Eyes This poem is easily read and understood just how you feel and am sure the person you have written it for would love to read it too. Karin Anderson

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Amanda Shields 25 November 2008

aww..this is so sweet she must be a very lucky woman...keep up the good work

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Yasmine Torres 25 November 2008

OMG that so sweet You must really love this woman :) so cute

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Elena Winters 25 November 2008

her being the poem.......that was a clever idea great job

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Nikki Clevenger 25 November 2008

Very good poem of your beautiful woman. I would say a love poem.

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Sally Plumb Plumb 18 October 2010

I accepted the word 'pin' as was your purpose anyway.

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Miriam Maia Padua 02 December 2008

really a poem you should be proud of..very sweet....paint a vivid picture of her beauty...your piece is sparkling like pin that everybody have seen...

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Samantha Gaona 02 December 2008

this is a great poem, i love how you connected it all so well, its amazing!

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Katherine Ng Li Hoon 28 November 2008

Great poem! I really enjoy reading it.

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Min Sia 27 November 2008

So sweet! What a lucky woman! Great write! Bravo!

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