Kesav Venkat Easwaran

Rookie - 287 Points (June 5th / Kerala- India)

Mirage - Poem by Kesav Venkat Easwaran

I knew I was wrong
In my perception
Only when I noticed the wind
Take a turn southwards,
Even as I thought
I was following her
On close heels,
As the shadows vouchsafed,
To find now she has gone far,
Though I could have caught up with
What I thought was my chance,
But for this tricky wind
That played thick,
Between me and my thinking,
Making me wonder how could wind
Play out the role of mirage,
In my sand-less waterless desire land…

Topic(s) of this poem: thoughts

Form: Dramatic Monologue

Comments about Mirage by Kesav Venkat Easwaran

  • Amitava Sur (8/29/2015 7:25:00 AM)

    A lovely imagery where you expressed your doubts and the behavior of changing wind which puts you in a dilemma. (Report) Reply

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  • Rahul Sharma (2/23/2014 3:46:00 AM)

    PERSPECTIVE write...
    loved it: -)
    thanks for sharing! : -)
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  • Loyd C. Taylor, Sr. (12/29/2013 11:16:00 AM)

    Hello poet friend Kesav. Great imagery and wonderful poem, I enjoyed. I have been away awhile and wanted to thank you for your great support on my poetry in the past. Happy New Year! Loyd (Report) Reply

  • Queeny Gona (10/13/2013 1:01:00 PM)

    Skeptical write and a wonderful read indeed! (Report) Reply

  • Elena Sandu (3/25/2013 5:31:00 PM)

    Oh the wind loves to play so much, lucky the chosen ones, if they can feel the hint. I also feel sometimes that wind may be way much more than human mind could ever understand... As always dear friend your poems brings to function my morning still sleeping brain. Thank you! (Report) Reply

  • Gajanan Mishra (2/21/2013 8:49:00 AM)

    Making me wonder. Good poem. thanks. (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Thursday, February 21, 2013

Poem Edited: Saturday, October 21, 2017

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