Misfortune Poem by Loke Kok yee

Misfortune

Rating: 5.0


Life will be pretty dull if nothing goes astray
What would be the weather if skies were never gray
Some setbacks are needed to spice up boring days
And not take for granted when cheer is holding sway

Challenges to confront for all to grow up strong
When bad luck encountered just shrug and move along
On a silver platter only a few belonged
The rest like you and I we'll overcome the wrongs

Misfortune crossing by does not presage the end
With lessons to be learned to avoid them if you can
Then bravely you can face whatever rounds the bend
Some take it with laughter that's the best way my friend

Misfortune
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Edward Kofi Louis 17 July 2016

Challenges to confront in life! ! Thanks for sharing.

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Loke Kok Yee 17 July 2016

thank you for your comment

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Kelly Kurt 17 July 2016

This kind of wisdom tends to only come with age. I preach perspective almost every day. I should just show people this poem instead!

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Akhtar Jawad 18 July 2016

A poem of wise thoughts, a nice message.

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Valsa George 18 July 2016

Fantastic...... I love the message the poem conveys! Yes, through setbacks we become stronger! ! A sure 10

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Bri Edwards 23 February 2017

Then bravely you can face whatever rounds the bend............maybe face it, but not necessarily overcome/defeat/avoid it. : ( AND NOW WE KNOW! TRUMP, 'MR. PRESIDENT' did WIN! ! ! ! WE shall see what transpires over his term in office. bri :) shall i use this or another in Feb. or March showcase? ?

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Bri Edwards 05 October 2016

When bad luck encountered just shrug and move along On a silver platter only a few belonged....................... ..................may i suggest: (ok, i shall) .....is in front of encountered, and belong instead of belonged. :) is that a new photo of you, young man? who will be laughing in December? [post-u.s.-election] a fine addition for MyPoemList. i always appreciate good rhyming. thanks. and some wise advice, though going astray could be fatal or crippling for some people/countries! now i won't be able to sleep tonight...........more than ten hours. bri :)

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Bri Edwards 31 July 2016

part of Kelly Kurt's comment: Kelly Kurt (7/17/2016 12: 08: 00 PM) This kind of wisdom tends to only come with age. what i'd like to know is: when do i get MINE? ? wisdom that is. i have quite a bit of age already. bri :)

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Bri Edwards 31 July 2016

Bro, is that YOU in the red tie. i'd vote for ya..............NOT! i like the poem. i guess i'll let can stand. it adds emphasis to what you are saying. otherwise, fine job on rhyming; well, good enough! ! bri :)

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Muhammad Ali 24 July 2016

Yes, the simple basic things in life, and you paint them beautifully

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