Vikrant Jog

Rookie - 0 Points (26-01-1994 / Kalyan)

Mist On The Mirror... - Poem by Vikrant Jog

When I saw in her eyes,
That day I recollected,
Recollected the time,
I had spent viewing me,
In the mirror,
A mirror that never lies,
The same mirror,
Which cannot understand the truth,
A mirror,
Which cannot see a thing,
But can reflect every precise detail,
I dared myself to look,
Deep down her eyes,
But couldn't…
Meanwhile she flickered,
And I felt,
As if that mirror,
Shattered into pieces,
But now again,
I could see the mirror,
But this time,
With the mist of tears…


Comments about Mist On The Mirror... by Vikrant Jog

  • Sarojini Pattayat (1/25/2013 4:52:00 AM)


    Nice poem.Read more to write well.
    Best wishes.
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  • (1/23/2013 8:53:00 AM)


    beautiful job indeed....well done (Report) Reply

  • Hazel Durham (1/18/2013 2:54:00 PM)


    A very deep and poignant poem! Loved it! ! (Report) Reply

  • Kishor Pathak (1/18/2013 9:47:00 AM)


    Lovely cook up dude. It surely gives us a good feel. Mirror never lies and when it comes to collection of memories; there can't be anything like mirror. It makes us recollect all our past, think about future, while making us boast upon present. Keep up the good work (Report) Reply

  • Neela Nath Das (1/18/2013 7:46:00 AM)


    Mirror mirrors mind and emotion as well. A nice reflection of thought. Loved. (Report) Reply

  • (1/18/2013 1:21:00 AM)


    like Luwar in, the pepping eye started to see the beauty of oneself, mirror the begin of our existence nemesis in the presence...Great poem in our time... (Report) Reply

  • Unwritten Soul (1/16/2013 12:45:00 PM)


    A feel...thats how i can say something when i read this, this poem got a self feel that i enjoyed it while reading the whole words_Soul (Report) Reply

  • Unwritten Soul (1/16/2013 12:44:00 PM)


    A feel...thats how i can say something when i read this, this poem got a self feel that i enjoyed it while reading the whole words_Soul (Report) Reply

  • Unwritten Soul (1/16/2013 12:44:00 PM)


    A feel...thats how i can say something when i read this, this poem got a self feel that i enjoyed it while reading the whole words_Soul (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Wednesday, January 16, 2013



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