Misunderstood Poem by Dr Kamran Haider Bukhari
Misunderstood
When I whisper your name
So serene and pure,
When I bow my mortal head
And kiss your divine feet,
When I sleep profoundly in your motherly lap
And fly to the unknown skies of tranquil joy;
When I adore you
And caress your dusky hair,
When I lick the barren soil
Of your fertile land,
When I wet your lips
With the tears of my naïve desire,
When my cheeks lie all over
Your naked breast:
I write a story of our eternal love
With my fragile tongue and smoky lips
On each pixel of your feverish skin,
But
When my tender words reach your patent heart,
Dig the burrows in your superficial mind
And pierce your shallow soul,
I receive an Alert:
Talk in a simple lingo!
You are MISUNDERSTOOD -
Dec 10,2008
Oh..so passionate..but so sad..for it was misunderstood... Hope..it would changed... But..I like this poem..there's the twist..still ringing inside me...thumping my heart... It's beautiful! Great poem!
very beautiful and strong write shah sahab, a poem which is so easy to understand with a lot of sweetness and a bit of bitterness....you've shown the true thoughts od a lover in this write, the thoughts with so much feelings...bravo, bravo and you say that 'still you are much beyond that I could compare myself with you', those are kind words you said for me instead i think im nothing as compare to you and many great poets here in PH....in thi poem you have put the heart on the palm of the hands which i think is not misunderstoodable, i might be wrong but i loved the flow of this remarkable poem...thanks for sharing this master piece 10+ and A++ added to my favs. rgds asif
Powerful composition indeed! Compact eloquence that captured a lot. Praiseworthy your memory's observation! 10++++
dear kamran...beautiful... true to the core.... please read my poem 'nobody' 10 votes
This is Great i love the flow to it.. Great work ~Krista~
Wow Dr Sahib.... There are many cures of sickness but threr sint no cure for love... well written brother 10/10
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
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4/23/2024 12:19:50 PM # 1.0.0.1119
the simpler the lingo the more the misunderstanding...be alert!