*moon Rapes His Sister Sun Poem by nimal dunuhinga

*moon Rapes His Sister Sun

Rating: 2.9


In the pitch darkness strange things can happen;
But unfortunately nowadays it happens in the daylight too.

* The title quoted from the book ' American Indian myths and legends' selected and edited by Richard Erdoes and Alfonso Ortiz.
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(This violent story tells of a stormy encounter between a female sun and a male moon.)

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Sally Plumb Plumb 13 December 2009

I don't know how to reply to this one.More food for thought.

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Rosa Banks 29 November 2009

wow no dur things can happen in the dark but ok good i guess it gets strait to the point good try!

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Ashraful Musaddeq 27 May 2009

Wonderful 10+++

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Dr Hitesh Sheth 07 April 2009

few lines tell the characteristric of modern age..............

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Anjali Sinha 09 February 2009

amazing--- the narration of the tragedy in just a few lines +++10 anjali

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Bharati Nayak 02 May 2024

Sun and moon are two celestial bodies, who give light to earth and sustain life on this planet! How sad, we invoke the names of purity for such filthy action !

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Swajeet Kumar Trivedi 28 November 2017

Have a nice time to read this poetry have a heart beat languagetowards the haven scene.

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Nivedita Bagchi SPC UK 27 February 2010

Uncontrolled and unguided gratification …psychopaths are in plenty… Excellent Caption...congrat… 10+ Ms. Nivedita UK

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Ken E Hall 09 February 2010

The brevity of the poem speaks out loud and clear worthy of top marks.. regards

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Pradyumna Jyotir 28 January 2010

So much conveyed with so little. A poem very well crafted.The brevity is dynamic as it is powerful. Thank you for sharing.

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kalubovila East, Sri Lanka
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