! ! More Thoughts Poem by Bob Blackwell

! ! More Thoughts

Rating: 3.1


As I reflect on what has gone before,
I consider, hopes and dreams
both past and present, some dreams
fulfilled, others broken, elapsed,
discarded from field of my imaginings.

I remember happy times, when laughter
poured out of happy smiling faces, fun times
blissful times of happiness, that had no care.
As tears fell down, I feel the dampness of
those dark moments of anguish on my face.

I mull over how fears I overcame of anxieties,
made me harden my resolve not to give into
hidden fears, to ignore them all the time. For
fears, worries, qualms and reservations all live
in future, and future is a time that never comes.

I recall the help, the good deeds I have given,
and recollect those times when I have erred.
As I journey ever onward through the mindscape
of my life, with its many ups and downs, I ponder
how the renewal of the spirit that made me happy,

was found through realising that we have to go,
through both shaded and sunny periods, effort is
needed, before we climb a mountain and descend
to life’s basin. What worth is life without hardship,
the reward of knowledge gained without some trial.


18-08-2009

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Cindy Kreiner Sera 24 August 2009

I am mesmerized by the peace you have found within yourself, expressed by your words used so eloquently in each write. I feel the sun break through the clouds as the promise of overcoming diversity shines through in this, your mindscape....

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Your thoughts are always so well documented and your writing talent allows me to read your philosophies in the relaxed environment of my home and reflect on what you have so wisely written. Thank you for sharing your highs and lows and the road you have taken as you journey through life. 10 love Karin

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Fiona Davidson 21 August 2009

onderfully thoughtful piece Bob...makes for an excellent read...Fi 10++++

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Fiona Davidson 20 August 2009

Breathtaking imagery combined with brilliant writing Bob...a combination that is irrisistable...Fi 10++++

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Patrick A. Martin 19 August 2009

And what mountains you have cilbed my friend and having said that I must assume each time you started at the base. So reading this gives all of us hope no matter where on the mountain we are.

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T McH 27 October 2009

Wonderfully, engagingly contemplative. Your last sentence abounds with a wisdom I acquired only recently. Thank you. t x

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Sonya Florentino 09 September 2009

i am touched and inspired reading this piece...thank you for sharing your thoughts....

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Sarwar Chowdhury 28 August 2009

powerful and reflective documentation! tremendous indeed! 10+

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Siddharth Singh 27 August 2009

Sparing a thought for the past and not thinking too much about the future, dwelling deep into the intricasies of like, an enchanting piece. Voted 10.

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Ritty Patnaik 24 August 2009

dear bob.....tremendous write! they are wise as well as inspiring. if one wants to get positive vibes, he should read this poem, which i call a anti depressant! god bless you for writing such good poetry. best wishes, ...ritty

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