Joseph Oladehinde Ibikunle

Freshman - 568 Points (31 of July 1988 / Alagbado, Lagos.)

Mortal Me (What The Body Says To The Soul) - Poem by Joseph Oladehinde Ibikunle

I, who will die
And entombed under a stone
Amid of sands I'll lie
I'll be too conscious to groan.
Mortal me, mortal me!
I, who will be forgotten
After some weeks of my demise
While all pride in me is rotten
I'll be unaware, to be precise.
Mortal me, mortal me!
I, who will be devoured,
My stomach, lungs and retina
By some maggots underworld
I'll be the breakfast, lunch and dinner.
Mortal me, mortal me!

Topic(s) of this poem: art

Comments about Mortal Me (What The Body Says To The Soul) by Joseph Oladehinde Ibikunle

  • Dr.tony Brahmin (4/29/2017 2:04:00 AM)

    I, who will be forgotten
    After some weeks of my demise
    While all pride in me is rotten
    i will be devoured
    Mortal me, mortal me

    A great consciousness you are trying to propagate my dear poet. This is our call, call of the poet. Thank you for this great poem
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  • Mike Barrett (10/22/2014 10:08:00 AM)

    I like the imagery but I hold to the principle that the body is but a vehicle for Soul (consciousness) to express itself in this physical dimension. Since Soul is a particle of God's consciousness, one of Its properties is eternalness. One's body is temporal; one's Soul is immortal! (Report) Reply

    (10/26/2014 6:17:00 AM)

    Thanks for your discerning comments. Very true, the soul is immortal, but then, the body which houses the soul is. The pronoun ''I'' is spiritually associated a speaker's soul and not his body unless ortherwise specified. I am compelled to by your true comment to change the title to Mortal Me (what the body says to the soul)

  • Neela Nath Das (3/18/2012 2:46:00 AM)

    Really. Nothing remains except the rotten body. Very beautiful poem. (Report) Reply

  • Miraj Patel (12/29/2011 1:34:00 PM)

    its really a nice poem... (Report) Reply

  • (12/26/2011 6:58:00 PM)

    This is very strong and more of a poem than the first one I read. (Report) Reply

  • Okoye Charles Chukwudi (12/26/2011 4:07:00 PM)

    aw...its really dark...but beautiful...makes me reason aboutdying and about the grave, , , , nice poem...thanks for sharing (Report) Reply

  • (12/20/2011 4:07:00 PM)

    A very dark poem. A really good write.
    May i invite you to read my new poem called,
    For Paul Blackburn. A true story.
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Poem Submitted: Tuesday, December 20, 2011

Poem Edited: Sunday, October 26, 2014

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