Motionless, Love Poem by Sandra Feldman
Motionless, Love
Love,
Unattended
Cold and Still
Haunting,
Love
That can kill,
So long, attended
Yet still, born
And not fulfilled
A mortal blow
Bleeding, still
Life desperately
Sad,
No living, will
Life still and lonely
Love
That can kill...
So sad and deeply poignant but beautiful poem. Love has many, many colors and its power is indescribable.
Heartrending poetic expressions that touch the soul. Captivating title.
Deeply heart felt! .. Magnificently expressed! .. Endless 10'S And Stars! ..++++++++++++++++++++++
2) A poem of this sort is very very difficult to write. Sandra, congratulations on an outstanding job! Love this poem!
I really love the ambiguity in this poem: abortion; still-born death; crib death and, of course, the death of a romantic relationship. There are other interpretations, but those are the ones that really stand out for me.
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
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Love as poisonous as venom of Karkotaka! that can kill, nay, annihilate! And loneness as sharp as a razor blade. Fantastic poem. Top s ore