Sunday, September 15, 2013

Move On! Comments

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Passing along the road
Covered with fog
On the way to the top of
The hill
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Geetha Jayakumar
fog
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Hazel Durham 06 June 2018

Great write, no matter what obstacles are in our way we have to move on with a positive attitude!

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Akhtar Jawad 31 October 2014

All is well that ends well...................

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Vipins Puthooran 15 September 2013

the road to the top of the hill will be hazardous but move on Face the challenges...'tis a true emotion! ! Magnanimous poem! ! !

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Poetheart Morgan 15 September 2013

We have to stop sometimes to see better! ! ! ! Even what is crystal could become glass! ! ! But we go on.

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Aftab Alam Khursheed 15 September 2013

Move on moved boldly and demanded to carry on nice poem thank you

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Jodie Hardy 15 September 2013

Great poem Geetha, It must have been the way you needed to go x x

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Geetha Jayakumar

Geetha Jayakumar

Kerala Palakkad
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