My Ardent Desire Poem by Devanshu Patel
My Ardent Desire
I'd like to love you as you are,
The way you love' and live' so far.
I like the way you've taken care
Of me, an' kids just being so fair
I'd like to sing a song of love,
The pious bond of all above;
For years and years until I die,
Until the sun brightens the sky.
I'd like You love me as I do
With all my virtues and vices, too.
Let us unite and take a vow
To love and live in peace from now.
Beautiful love poem embellished in poetic rhyme and rhythm. Well conceived and elegantly penned from the heart. Thanks for sharing Devanshu.
so happy to read this poem dear Devanushu! It's a blessing to love and be loved.. even after 28 years of married life, you hold her close to your heart...it's amazing! May your love for each other grow strong as each passing day! stay blessed! 10
loving your beloved wife as she is......... it is easily said.. but difficult to practice....... your good will born out of love will make you keep your promises to her........ lovely poem on love. tony
Wonderful work Devanshu! It's really one of the wonderful love songs I have ever read. Finely fabricated ideas with a nice fusion of emotions, words and rhythm rarely seen together. Thanks for sharing....10+++++
Lovely, fascinating poem, Dear Poet! The opening line impresses me - I'd like to love you as you are - beautiful! I have to say - Your wife is a fortunate lady! Enjoy reading your poems!
I'd like You love me as I do With all my virtues and vices, too. Let us unite and take a vow To love and live in peace ALWAYS XXXXXfrom now.? ? ? ? ? Such love is rare today some poets betray read each one and to them say love your wife keep off your eyes from mine
What a lovely thing to give as gift! A gift that means well, and comes from heart but with enough art to make it endearing. Beautiful.
Superb poem. This is how love, true love is. Inspiring and touching.
I will pray to God that this love will get double, triple and multiple every year...An awesome one...
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
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A good start with a nice poem, Devanshu. You may like to read my poem, Love And Iust. Thank you.