My Eyes Poem by Jazlle D. H. **contentment is the key to happiness

My Eyes

Rating: 4.9

This poem is for Abeer, one of my tutees and a grade 3 student, asked me to write a poem for her school project.

I have two eyes
look at them
they are so bright.
To the left, to the right
up and down they are looking around
searching for the sound.
They weep when I'm sad
They smile when I'm glad
They peep when I want to sneak
They sleep to have a break
My eyes are so nice
I keep gazing at the mirror thrice
so I must take care of my eyes
to see the world rise.

18th March 2008
Khalidya, AD, UAE

Ravi Sathasivam 06 July 2008

' Your eyes are the light of your heart that's sees happiness and sadness' - Ravi Your poem is very good Thanks for sharing

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Paul Hamer 06 July 2008

Your eyes are nice and light like a child.Your simplicity your charm. x

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Tango 07 July 2008

The eyes are the window to the soul, so they say. An excellent poem.

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Rajaram Ramachandran 07 July 2008

True, we should take best care of our eyes, which help us to see the outside world.

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Raj Nandy 07 July 2008

A great write Joan, keep writing. - Raj Nandy

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Afzal Shauq 24 June 2009

well...seems talking and speaking eyes with a lot of good impressive effects... really a good and realistic poem...well written and courageous way of expressions... love this stanza of the poem very much.. My eyes are so nice I keep gazing at the mirror thrice so I must take care of my eyes to see the world rise. yes... eyes are every thing in the face and good you got best eyes as you said so... wonderful 10+++++++++

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Beautiful eyes. Very well written.I really like it.

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Paul Butters 12 July 2008

A most charming and clever poem. Has an endearing lightness. Must have got a good grade surely. A ten from me anyway. Paul.

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Anjali Sinha 11 July 2008

Good poem. Often we neglect our eyes. Yes we should take care of them

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Kris Smith 10 July 2008

Yes young lady your eyes are beautiful use them for all that is beautiful in this world close them to the ugliness 10 Chris

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