Some flowery speech
Comatose
Was not unlike
Music from reed
On the winds flying
Spontaneous
You want it back
Deframed
Original
Shall I go to the same state
Of unconsciousness
Conversations have the ambient
Warmth of love
I love you
Because it matters not
In the form
I will recall the moment
I have to have my eyes one with you
If you forgive me
For my forgetfulness
Islamabad
25/3/2010
Spontaneity is great creative skill. The momnet gone can be recreated but it can never be the same. I like this poem's theme.
A reed's flowery speach.to so far it does reach..in a moment of a forgiveness for forgetfullness of a pain and a love born breech... a healer was that flowery speach... beautiful...so warm and touching vesres...
i like the theme..forgetfulness, sometimes it comes..nicely done..
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
…’I love you/Because it matters not/In the form…’ here you Sir succeeded to deploy emotion …indeed Love is a Form from every from Voted 10 Ms. Nivedita UK