My One Last Goodbye Poem by Lyn Paul
My One Last Goodbye
My one last goodbye will not feel pain,
It will not feel heartache it will not see rain.
I know your heart will ache, more unbearable than pain,
Yet you must believe we will.. be together again.
As I close my eyes, Heaven's gates opened wide,
It is so incredibly beautiful, you would not believe I had died.
All were dressed in pure white with smiles so wide,
Pure amazement. Have I really, .. truly died?
There was ocean, there was forest, with flowers galore...
Everyone was wealthy, there were.. No.. Poor
A symphony was playing I felt so at peace.....
At peace for this is death and we are all so scared,
But I should never have feared. I should never have cared.
There is picturesque white cloud and sky so blue,
Absolute sunshine with songbirds making me believe I am still with you.
So if you feel that you are Knocking on Heavens Door
Let the gates open, you will fear no evil. You will never be poor.
Copyright Reserved May 2014
LYN PAUL
I feel this write has a bit different than others of yours....and it always good, you bring your own thought in a circular view, i mean you did write in a new way..Peace is a bless when it comes it erase all dark shadow and kiss us like a wind from heaven, good enough for us to feel calm_SOul
Beautiful Lyn, very imaginative write. Enjoyed reading very much.
Such a beautiful place described here, I too have this hope in my heart. TFS
Your words envelope me as I believe it all to be true. Bliss, total bliss, love it.
Something deep and spiritual hit me here, Lyn Paul, your words have an effect, a strong one, just like a born teacher has: There is picturesque white cloud and sky so blue, Absolute sunshine with songbirds making me believe I am still with you. So if you feel that you are Knocking on Heavens Door Let the gates open, you will fear no evil. You will never be poor.
What a lovely vision of heaven above, written with great panache! Inspired write!
To know that a great world awaits us is really heartening!
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
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4/18/2024 9:53:07 PM # 1.0.0.1119
This leaves me in less dread of Death! I also imagine that God's kingdom would be full of beauty, enchantment and bliss! Enjoyed this beautiful picture of the world beyond death! !