My Little One Poem by yellowbell alamanda

My Little One

Rating: 5.0


Why are you crying, afraid of what?
Cheer up, don't be forgetful like that!
For I am with you, where you are
never let you down even I'm far.

As what I have left you my words
and being knew me as your sword
I will not leave you in time of troubles
I'm there to lend you strength for sure.

Rain and flood, a piece of challenge.
Do not give up, I serve you as way.
I said, go on, see your better day
and do the best for more grace.

When you're at your rainbows end
or at the middle of black and white
whatever happens mind to look back
and you will see my wave of good luck!

So go on my dear little one
afraid not because you are not alone
from the start as your journeys begun
I said I'm with you my dear one.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Hari Khabrani 22 July 2009

Strengthening support for achieving the goals of life. In them consider not single. Good write. Shared and enjoyed.10+

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Afzal Shauq 22 July 2009

So go on my dear little one afraid not because you are not alone from the start as your journeys begun I said I'm with you my little one. an good poem written in a rich way about life and its way to spend.. its really a good poem, idea in sound, the way you wrote is impressive enough..well done...10/10

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Lycko Chizo 25 July 2009

I love this poem. It do cheer me up. And make me feel that I'm no alone. I like the way you talk to your reader on this poem. It help those who are lonely and alone. I hope you are real and stay with me. I love the poem. Such a masterpiece! 10!

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Naida Nepascua Supnet 05 June 2011

this brings me a smile...it is full of love and encouragement

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Eyan Desir 08 October 2009

Line 7 should be 'hold me as a sword'...or is this what you wanted to say Good write to your child...10s

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Marieta Maglas 30 July 2009

nice poem, lovely to read

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Kee Thampi 30 July 2009

When you're at your rainbows end or at the middle of black and white whatever happens mind to look back and you will see my wave of good luck! nicely writtn poem

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Sameer Ahmed 26 July 2009

A good bondage has been shown with the little one. May the child live long.

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