Like the twinkle of the star,
Like the beating of heart,
Like the flutter of wings,
Like the blessing of god,
Is the beauty of my love
Without whom i cannot make a move
The atmosphere around is looking fine
Which was not, until she was mine.
I fear for the day
When she will be away
Can i live without her
Will remain a question forever
Let the day never come
Tomorrow never dies, but we do
Her bodies flowering scent,
Can show the way she went.
Many eyes, some good, some bad
Are on lookout for her, which makes me sad
To me, she always remained faithful
Which made my life wonderful.
Copyright V.G.Aarella
this was fantastic Vikram! excellent flow and beautiful metaphors.. well done! HBH
WELL CRAFTED WORK...SMOOTH FLUX, TIGHT, CRISP STRUCTURE...SOBERING THEME WELL EXPRESSED...''''''''''''''''''''''''''FRANK JOB WELL DONE, VIK!
heyyy Vikram this is a great poem! Does she exist, or is this just some brilliant imagination? a definite 10/10 from me! Keep up the great writing! Dona
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
Apt expression of love.Godod poem