My Mother - 1 Poem by Subhas Chandra Chakra

My Mother - 1

Rating: 5.0


Oh mother!
You were…
A sweater in my winter,
A cooler in my summer,
An umbrella in the rains,
An epic during the strains.


You had been…
A roof over my head,
A plate under my bread,
A sheet upon my bed,
A patting hand for what I did.

You will remain…
The source of
Blessings eternal,
The stream of
Learnings divine,
The path of love
For everyone humane,
The wrath of my life
To thrash the insane.

You are…
Still in my heart
As a forgiving being,
Still in my brain
As a voice of caring,

Still within me
As a loving divine stream,
Still with me
As a living human dream.
I feel proud
That I am on this Earth
Just because you placed
Me in your womb,
Pray, ever I would
Ever again henceforth
To be born off you,
After I enter the tomb.

Saturday, May 7, 2016
Topic(s) of this poem: love,mother,mother and child
COMMENTS OF THE POEM

Mom sweet mom, our guardian angle living god, beautiful tribute to all mother as tomorrow is mother's day, thanks

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Thank you ma'am for diverting your precious, creative moments towards reading the poem. I felt the inspiration to compose it now, just after reading that poem of yours.Thanks again. Subhas

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Seema Sharma Rimi 08 May 2016

I feel proud That I am on this Earth Just because you placed Me in your womb, Pray, ever I would Ever again henceforth To be born off you, After I enter the tomb. Lovely ode to such a holy and pious mother. Beautifully written. Thanks for sharing the poem. Full marks. Seema

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Thanks Seema for your lovely and inspiring remarks. I expect more of it in the near future. Subhas

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Geeta Radhakrishna Menon 07 March 2017

What a beautiful tribute to your dear Mother! The metaphors utilised to describe your Mother are outstanding! God bless Subhas!

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Sabita Sahoo 29 May 2016

You are… Still in my heart As a forgiving being, Still in my brain As a voice of caring, Still within me As a loving divine stream, Still with me As a living human dream. I feel proud That I am on this Earth Just because you placed Me in your womb, Pray, ever I would Ever again henceforth To be born off you, After I enter the tomb. Wow it is a beautiful ode to all mothers. Thanks for sharing the poem.

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Anita Aparajita Das 21 May 2016

You had been… A roof over my head, A plate under my bread, A sheet upon my bed, A patting hand for what I did. Beautiful poem on mother.loved each word, each stanza.

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Loke Kok Yee 13 May 2016

great tribute in a well written poem thanks-10

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Chan Mongol 09 May 2016

You are… Still in my heart As a forgiving being, Still in my brain As a voice of caring, ____________All children should think like this everyday. Every stanza is great in the poem. All poems of the poet are well constructed and academic toachieve number 10 from me. Thanks for sharing.

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Thanks sir for your remarks and inspiration. I am grateful to you for your kind visit.

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Subhas Chandra Chakra

Subhas Chandra Chakra

Sainkul, Anandapur, Odisha, India
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