My Pain 02 Poem by Sheikh Shadi Marjan

My Pain 02

Rating: 5.0


I got wet in the rain
And cried loudly
who can cry more?

I heard violin tunes
And cried silently
who can cry more?

I also cried with flute
who can cry more?

Their tears are trivial than me!

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Mihaela Pirjol 14 September 2018

This is an emotionally intense poem, written and recited wholeheartedly!

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Edward Kofi Louis 06 August 2018

Wet in the rain! ! ! ! But hope still lies ahead of you. Thanks for sharing.

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Naila Rais 29 July 2018

Oh! So wonderful poetry..... Deep in thoughts 💭...... Thnx for sharing.... Naila

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Mahtab Bangalee 21 July 2018

O Rain please come pacify my tears and vein................ /// nice writing

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Rose Marie Juan-austin 21 July 2018

A poignant write. A vivid depiction of pain. Well crafted piece of work.10

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