My Pain Poem by Sheikh Shadi Marjan

My Pain

Rating: 5.0


In the tears of the flute
I've lost far beyond
The tune of that flute reflects the tune of my cry
She's crying and crying, but why?
Why's she crying so much?
What's her suffering?
Who's hit her, who's left her?
Doesn't she know?
My pain is much more than hers!

My Pain
Tuesday, July 10, 2018
Topic(s) of this poem: sad love
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Naila Rais 13 July 2018

So sad.... Departure of love is sadly depicted.... Keep it up... Best wishes Naila

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thank you...@Naila

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Mary Skarpathiotaki 06 August 2018

Bravo! 10++++++++++++++++++++++

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Sheikh Shadi Marjan 14 September 2018

thank you my dear friend

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Edward Kofi Louis 06 August 2018

Pains of life! ! ! ! Never give up on your dreams! Thanks for sharing.

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Sheikh Shadi Marjan 01 August 2018

thank you friend...............

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Cheryl Tutaan 01 August 2018

The tune of that flute reflects the tune of my cry...Such a poignant poem indeed...Thank you for sharing, Marjan. A highest 10.

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Sheikh Shadi Marjan 08 August 2019

thank you for your remarkable comment

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Riza Braholli 26 July 2018

a poetry full of love enthusiasm..., but so sad is this poem.... best wishes for you... dr. riza

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thank you from my deepest being for your lovely and inspiring responses.

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