My Pain ~ And Candle Flames Poem by M. Asim Nehal

My Pain ~ And Candle Flames

Rating: 3.8

Each tear like a candle flame,
burning bright, but aching with pain,
flickering like the candles' light,
In the stillness of this lonely night,
as I let my emotions free ~
I witness my agony dripping along,
and rendering this night with a divine song,
they illuminate the path of my pain,
till the tears are slowly dried,
and gently bid the night goodbye.

Saturday, June 3, 2023
Topic(s) of this poem: pain,melancholy
LeeAnn Azzopardi 03 June 2023

I love the last line it was beautifully put

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David Wood 03 June 2023

We have to beat the melancholy blues otherwise it will overtake life.

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Anjandev Roy 03 June 2023

......illuminate the path of my pain...... wonderful.....

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Poetic Sky 05 June 2023

You co-related the pain and candles nicely. Too good.

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Nosheen Irfan 04 June 2023

Wo just awesome! Bravo!

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Nabakishore Dash 04 June 2023

Beautiful piece.

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Rajan T Renganathan 04 June 2023

Only candles know their pain of burning whole night.

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Rajan T Renganathan 04 June 2023

Nice way to present your pain using candles.

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