~ My Precious Time ~
Ms. Nivedita
UK
July 1,2010
Time is best healer
Time is best killer
Time is best sharpener
Time is best blunter
Time repeats
Time completes.
Sorry time
I’ve no time
To give you
My precious time!
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Each second is unique. When Time spent, it'll never come back like the spoken word, the thrown arrow and the lost chance. Time is precious, sure, because it's unique and I love such uniqueness. In fact we all live just a long day which finishes by a seperation moment, the moment of DEATH (our common destination) . Nivedita I've enjoyed reading your poem. ThanksForSharing :)
Time, the ever changing reality which changes everything, gets a poetic expression through this poem.
It resembles to the poem 'Ring out, wild bells' written by Lord Tennyson. Yes time is precious, and we should move ahead trusting the mighty time without an iota of doubt. Very nicely composed.10+++
A bit unusual in Style but really got your point across, nice one! As they say, good things come in small measures!
What a wonderful wordplay with such great meaning and in end time is denied by you not having time for time itself Your Precious Time love it.
Front and center. Best case against time...'i have no time to give you my time' very creative and written with such great disposition. totally enjoyed
A deep little poem. Makes one contemplate! They say time is of the essence! Enjoyed read! ; D
Time and tide waits for no man. Procrastination is thief of time. Time is the essence of any contract. Catch time by the forelock. Time alone will set right things. One should be time conscious. Timetable. Measure time. Keep time. Life time achievement. How many times I can tell you about this time? It is your good time that everyone appreciate your wonderful work.
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
Timing is the cause of many of life truamatic events.