My Religion Poem by C. P. Sharma

My Religion

Rating: 4.9


My religion perpetually flows,
It never loses its sheen & glow;
My religion never binds,
It always opens up the mind.

Love lesson is at its heart,
Anger and violence depart,
Sympathy & coexist impart,
It never sets the hearts apart.

My religion has least rules,
It has always kept me cool;
It has never made me fool,
With me it is a rational tool.

It is a great uniting force,
Time-space changes its course;
It doesn’t give feeling of remorse,
Of strength & peace it is great source.

Hindus and Muslims all embrace,
Buddhists & Christians have face;
Love for all religions at its base,
From it descends heavenly grace.

I won’t give my religion a name,
Name always has brought blame;
Ever it was and ever it will be,
Its stream overflows perpetual glee.

Come and in love religion dive deep;
All Heavenly blessings on you heap.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Kassem Oude 29 May 2009

the poem is great in its meaning and style, it is extremely beautiful, it reveals the depth of your thinking, my best friend. I hope it would be a sole religion called humanity and all believe in it.

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Carl Harris 29 May 2009

Although this is a good and very well expressed poem, C P, it is not proper to use '&' in place of the word 'and.' Poetry is not text messaging or e-mail jargon, as I am sure you are well aware. It actually detracts from your beautiful poem. Carl.

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Ashraful Musaddeq 29 May 2009

Truly beautiful work, a poem in favor of mankind.10+++

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Sandra Fowler 19 May 2009

Written with the style and grace that is present in all of your poems. Take care. Warm regards, Sandra

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Lynda Robson 19 May 2009

Thank you for describing the Hindu religion to us, a very well thought out piece, written with a lot of skill, Lynda xx 10

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Miriam Maia Padua 22 August 2009

this is great...wholesome divine...i love the theme... Wise, hearty thoughts here... Faith and love for God and Religion... A fruitful piece 10+++ Lovelots, Maia

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Ruth Walters 20 August 2009

It sounds like a good to me Ruthy: -)

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Bob Blackwell 04 June 2009

I like your Loves religion, it is the best by far. Love does not need rules, it just flows, if we all tapped into loves stream, we surely would have a lovely world. Wise words my friend in an excellent poem, I have taken it with me. 10++

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PERSIAN NIGHTINGALE 29 May 2009

attentive poem, true, thanks for sharing

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Audrey Heller 29 May 2009

It's wonderful, when someone finds something they deeply believe in and gives them, ultimate peace! And I say to you my friend, I hope it, will never cease! You can't go wrong, when you feel so strong, it helps you, to grow! So keep on this course and you'll have no remorse, this much, I do know! !

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C. P. Sharma

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Bissau, Rajasthan
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